Dominica Beverley
8 April 2013
Megan Keaton
ENGL 1103 Academic Essay
As
we go about our daily lives, we hear music all around us. Especially in the
urban youth, music is a big part of their lives. It can motivate them, give
them an emotional release, or even distract them from completing tasks. Here is
one thing I do wonder about, how does it affect them in school? Research shows
that music has a significant effect on students in which the psychological processes
in their brain can manipulate mood and when moods change, the actions of the
person changes. Different types and styles of music contribute to this as well.
Music
on My Mind
As
students, we have something that helps us focus and concentrate on completing
tasks, for some students music is their motivator. Veda Brown says that, “Adolescents’
attitudes about school, material success, appreciation of themselves and others
seem to be shaped to a large extent by the music they listen to” (49). She
suggests that the types of music that kids listen to adjust their attitudes. It
is almost as if the music influences their decisions in school. However, Sharon
Lee claims that even if we don’t voluntarily choose the music, the surrounding
music has some effect on our mood and behavior as well. She states, “Also are
important are the effects of the music we do not choose, but are subjected
through our environment choices such as restaurants and stores” (1). Brown says
it may be the music that students choose that affects their behavior and Lee
says that music affects students no matter where it comes from. Lee asks the
question, “Can it [music] help students study more effectively, or does it
distract from the completion of homework?” (2). The answer could go either way,
depending on the type of student.
Different
Types of Students
Different types of
students are dispersed throughout the learning community. Every student learns
differently and the aids that they use are different as well. Some students
need complete silence to work or to focus while others need a snazzy beat in
the background to keep them motivated while completing assignments. In the
urban youth, students aren’t performing as well as the majority students (white
students) and so they may need some extra help or an extra push to get them
going. The Regional Education Laboratory, who has studied stereotypes about African
American students, claims that, “In a society where economic opportunity
depends heavily on scholastic success, even a partial narrowing of the
achievement gap would lead to a positive change in the lives of academically
at-risk children” (1). Since African American students or black students
already have a hard time in school with stereotypes labeling them as failures,
these students need some support to help them overcome this issue. They do it
by incorporating music in their habits. Sharon Lee tells the reader about an
article from 1991 written by Martha Giles and Giles said “Intervention programs
for children at risk could use music to help them relax, build their
self-esteem, and help them with their emotional problems” (3). Music not only
can help students focus but it can act as a emotional release when the weight
of school is overbearing. This is another good use of music as students in
school.
Music
in the Schools
If
music helps students perform better outside of school, why not bring music
inside the schools and integrate it into the curriculum? Margaret Hagood, along
with other authors, discusses the thought of including music in the teaching
instruction. They suggest that it would give the teachers an edge if they
include pop culture in their instruction and it would have the students more
interested since the music already appeals to them. She states, “They [21st
century texts] also include pop culture texts, which are mass-generated print
and non-print texts (e.g., comics, anime, TV shows, movies, videos, young adult
books, music lyrics) that use multiple modes (e.g., linguistic, visual, aural,
performative) to entice audiences to use them” (2). By incorporating music and
other forms of pop culture into the instruction, teachers and students will be
satisfied. Teachers will gain student attention and comprehension and the students
will be engaged because they have something that is interesting to them to make
learning a little bit easier. Marc Hill can agree with this notion of including
pop culture and music into the classroom. He says, “Given the salience of
hip-hop culture in the lives of many American youth, the educational community
has begun to pay considerable attention to the pedagogical possibilities of
hip-hop culture within formal schooling contexts” (2). He explains of scholars
who have made a course titled “Hip Hop Lit” which is a course in which you
study different aspects of hip hop and listen to songs and analyze them. These
scholars understand and have “shown how the elements of hip-hop and other forms
of popular culture—rap music, turntablism, break dancing, graffiti culture,
fashion, and language—can be used within classrooms to improve students’ motivation,
teach critical media literacy, foster critical consciousness, and transmit
disciplinary knowledge” (2). Not all teachers think that music or pop culture incorporated
into the curriculum or teacher instruction is a good idea.
It’s
a Distraction
As it was stated in the previous
paragraphs, not everybody can think of music as an asset when it comes to
school or schoolwork. With students who are struggling, especially black students,
may be emotionally distraught and use music as a release. It can, in turn,
cause them to act out of character. For example if a song’s lyric has violence
and an angry tone, it may cause the student to act in such a way. Veda Brown
states, “Children who lack pro-social skills associated with stable emotional intelligence
tend to be easily influenced by various environmental factors such as peers and
media. Some adults believe that this emotional weakness in children may leave
them vulnerable to ideas of violence, sexual promiscuity, and other forms of
anti-social behavior that are often portrayed in some popular hip-hop songs and
videos” (51). From society’s point of view, the music, videos, and other forms
of pop culture are aimed at the adolescents. Society has placed negative views
on Black children and students and that is why it is hard for them to focus in
school. These students are worried about failing and living up to that
stereotype. The Regional Education Laboratory claims, “stereotype threat arises
from a fear among members of group of reinforcing negative stereotypes about
the intellectual ability of the group” (1). From a teacher’s and a parent’s
standpoint, they oppose music only if it is negatively impacting their child.
Brown writes, “Well meaning adults have often complained that the popular music
of today seems to have a detrimental effect on children’s thought and
subsequent behavioral patterns. Particularly, many adults believe that the
lyrics of some celebrated musical artists such as Fifty-Cent, Nelly, Foxy
Brown, Marilyn Manson, Lil’ Kim, and Eminem have often undercut the very
attributes, skills, and values of emotional intelligence that form the basis
for pro-social behavior” (51). I know of a song by Soulja Boy called “Throw
Some D’s”. I can understand why a responsible adult figure would be very
cautious of what their child/student listens to. In his song, he says, “I always be in school, but I be walkin’ halls/A lot of teachers give me test but they be
super hard/I get into some
trouble, then my mama calls/But after I get out the office I’ma tell ’em all dat/
I’ma superstar and that’s best/ Every time you see me up in class, my head on that desk” (MetroLyrics.com). If I was a parent, I wouldn’t want my child or my student listening to someone who is promoting bad gestures in school. Since children listen to this artist and idolize him, they might be tempted to act like him, which causes a problem for everybody. Music can be a benefit and a fault, but it all depends who you listen to and what message they are sending to the listener.
I’ma superstar and that’s best/ Every time you see me up in class, my head on that desk” (MetroLyrics.com). If I was a parent, I wouldn’t want my child or my student listening to someone who is promoting bad gestures in school. Since children listen to this artist and idolize him, they might be tempted to act like him, which causes a problem for everybody. Music can be a benefit and a fault, but it all depends who you listen to and what message they are sending to the listener.
Dominica, the structure of your paper is great but I find that you get too caught up in summarizing the authors' arguments. You do not want to make your paper seem like another annotated bibliography. In addition, try to incorporate something that you believe the author left out in their article that maybe you think should have been included. Good job!
ReplyDeleteDominica, I thought your subtitles worked really well in your paper. I also think the structure is good, and I did not see any apparent grammatical errors. I think if you add in your personal experiences to this paper you could easily make it the required length, and it would be a quick revision. Over all, I understood all of the arguments you presented and I think you did a very good job with your research.
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