Workshop Reflection

What advice did you receive from each member of your group?  Explain each person’s advice separately and be specific.
My group didn't have enough to read over my academic essay during workshop time in class, so they commented on my blog. Brian said that structure of my paper was great but it seems like an annotated bibliography with the summary of the author's arguments. He suggested that I include  things that the author left out or something I think they should have included. Kayla liked the use of subheadings in my paper. She thinks that I should add some personal experiences. She agreed with Brian on the structure of my paper and she didn't see any grammatical errors and she understood all of my arguments. I have not received any feedback from Rachel yet so I don't have anything to say about her.

What was the most helpful piece of advice you received? Explain.
The most helpful pieces of advice came from Brian and Kayla. They both told me things that would enhance my paper and that would get my paper to the required length along with the necessary information. They told me to include include more of the author's point of view and somethings that they left out as well as some of my personal experiences with the subjects.

What was the least helpful piece of advice you received?  Explain.
I didn't not receive any feedback from Rachel so that could potentially help me in the revision of my paper but other than that the other information that I received was very helpful to me.

What are your plans for revision?  Be specific.  I should be able to understand exactly how your work will change in exactly which places.
When I revise my paper, I will include information from my personal experiences and go back to find places where I summarized and analyze them. I will also find out what the author's didn't answer in the sources and incorporate that in my paper.