In your Writing History Response, you added much stronger analysis of how your experiences shaped your writing. I wanted to know more about your beliefs about writing. For example, I wanted to see more sentences like: “A decent writer has most of their thoughts together, but may not know how to present them to the reader or the audience of their piece. As I learned in fourth grade with the BCR’s, I know that structure is essential to me in which I write my papers or essays or anything for that matter.”
In your Exploratory Essay, you explained more about what the authors are suggesting. I still wanted to see you asking more questions and explaining how the authors were suggesting what you said they were suggesting.
In your Annotated Bibliography, you successfully articulate the holes in each author’s arguments. There is still some summary in your analysis paragraphs.
In your Joining the Conversation piece, you had revised sentences to provide clarity and formality. There are still a couple places you needed to back your claims with sources.
Dear Dominica,
ReplyDeleteIn your Writing History Response, you added much stronger analysis of how your experiences shaped your writing. I wanted to know more about your beliefs about writing. For example, I wanted to see more sentences like: “A decent writer has most of their thoughts together, but may not know how to present them to the reader or the audience of their piece. As I learned in fourth grade with the BCR’s, I know that structure is essential to me in which I write my papers or essays or anything for that matter.”
In your Exploratory Essay, you explained more about what the authors are suggesting. I still wanted to see you asking more questions and explaining how the authors were suggesting what you said they were suggesting.
In your Annotated Bibliography, you successfully articulate the holes in each author’s arguments. There is still some summary in your analysis paragraphs.
In your Joining the Conversation piece, you had revised sentences to provide clarity and formality. There are still a couple places you needed to back your claims with sources.
Megan