"Annotated Bibliography 2nd Draft" Reflection

What was the most helpful piece of advice you received? Explain.
Megan told me to analyze the second paragraphs of most of the sources because I was summarizing them. By analyzing them, I can really get some insight on what the author tried to portray to the reader. This can also help me by telling me if the source was credible or not and how this information from the source will
answer all my questions.
What was the least helpful piece of advice you received? Explain.
I did not receive any piece of advice that wasn't helpful to my revision of my paper. All advice and criticism is helpful to me.

What questions do you have about Megan’s comments?
When you ask me to give more examples of how different music can cause different reactions, I thought that I would explain that in detail in my paper. I didn't think I had to go into too much about this in my bibliography.

What are your plans for revision?  Be specific.  I should be able to understand exactly how your work will change in exactly which places.
To revise my Annotated Bibliography, I plan on analyzing my sources in the second paragraph instead of summarizing them. I also plan on extending my commentary to give more examples to connect the reader to my source. I need to figure the placement of information as far as in my paper.